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步驟與要點(diǎn)如下:
1.確定主題,并在文中說(shuō)明原因;
2.圍繞主題,進(jìn)行敘述;
3.寫出具體計(jì)劃,也可以講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷。
要求:
1. 補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題(參考詞匯:better, happier,healthier, stronger等);
2. 字跡工整,內(nèi)容完整連貫,語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范;
3. 鼓勵(lì)寫出真情實(shí)感,對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。短文的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
4. 作文中可以寫出具體計(jì)劃內(nèi)容,也可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,但要注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用;如果參照短文中的內(nèi)容,不可以直接引用短文中的句子;
5. 作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。
Good habits make me________
Good habits are important in our lives.They influence us a lot in many ways. I think …
以上題干,Hersey給大家簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)為三要素:標(biāo)題;原因;事例【計(jì)劃、故事、經(jīng)歷三選其一】。當(dāng)然,三要素一定要一致,原因要指向觀點(diǎn),事例要指向原因+觀點(diǎn)。
接下來(lái),怎樣開(kāi)始寫呢?我們通常要以三部分來(lái)完成寫作。
第一部分,觀點(diǎn)+原因。如I think good habits make me healthier.(觀點(diǎn)) With good habits, I can live a regular life.(原因)
第二部分,也是最重要的部分——事例。本部分是作文的主體部分,事例一定要突出中心,支持自己的觀點(diǎn)成立。首先,三選一,計(jì)劃要用將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述,故事、經(jīng)歷要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。個(gè)人認(rèn)為經(jīng)歷最好寫,也最有說(shuō)服力。最簡(jiǎn)單的寫法就是Time-Place-Character-Beginning-Middle-Ending,也就是大家熟悉的記敘文六要素了。如:I can still remember the experience of the summer holiday before Ibecame a junior high school student, I had a large amount of free time. I choseto play computer games all day and all night to relax. Sometimes I even forgotto have dinner. At last, I got very sick and went to hospital. The doctor toldme that I must keep good habits such as eating on time and doing exercisesregularly. From then on, I changed my lifestyle. I woke up early and wentjogging every morning; I had every meal regularly, and so on. As a result, Ibecame healthier and healthier.
第三部分,總結(jié)。目的是升華主題,發(fā)出暢想、號(hào)召等。如:In my opinion, keeping good habits is the most helpful way to keephealthy. If you want to become healthier, it is high time that you should keepgood habits.
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