第一部分

記敘文體裁解讀及人物描寫(xiě)點(diǎn)撥

體裁解讀

記敘文是以記人敘事為主要內(nèi)容的文章，通常包括六個(gè)要索:時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因及結(jié)果，寫(xiě)作時(shí)各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具備。寫(xiě)記敘類(lèi)文章時(shí)除了六個(gè)要素外，還要注意以下幾點(diǎn):

1記敘方式。 通常有順敘、倒敘和插敘三種。順敘是英語(yǔ)記敘文最常用的一 種記敘方式，即按照事件發(fā)展的時(shí)間先后順序來(lái)敘述。

2.人稱。一般用第一人稱和第三人稱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。第一人稱是從“參與者”親眼所見(jiàn)、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷開(kāi)始敘述;第三人稱是以“觀察者”的身份進(jìn)行記敘，通過(guò)作者與讀者之外的第三者，直接把故事呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前。

3.時(shí)態(tài)。記敘文用于記敘過(guò)去發(fā)生的事件或經(jīng)歷，因此常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)， 還可根據(jù)上下文輔以其他時(shí)態(tài)。

人物描寫(xiě)點(diǎn)撥

人物描寫(xiě)類(lèi)的作文， 大多圍繞親情、友情、師生情、榜樣力量、人物奮斗等話題展開(kāi)，或敘事抒懷，或表明個(gè)人對(duì)人物所持的情感。此類(lèi)文章以記敘文居多，也可夾敘夾議。來(lái)出在中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，初中階段的內(nèi)容與要求中所提到的話題，比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (興趣和愛(ài)好)等，會(huì)涉及到人物描寫(xiě)。

人物描寫(xiě)的文章，對(duì)人物各方面的描寫(xiě)是必不可少的:外貌描寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)、神態(tài)描寫(xiě)、動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)、心理描寫(xiě)等等，根據(jù)文章的需要，確定寫(xiě)哪些，哪些詳寫(xiě)，哪些略寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)人離不開(kāi)寫(xiě)事，因?yàn)槿宋锏奶攸c(diǎn)總是在具體的事例中表現(xiàn)出來(lái)的。文章時(shí)態(tài)要根據(jù)事情發(fā)生的頻率而定:經(jīng)常性的行為多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)， 一次性的行為多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，當(dāng)然，其他時(shí)態(tài)也可能會(huì)涉及。

在寫(xiě)人的時(shí)候，我們可以通過(guò)以下三部分來(lái)寫(xiě)作:

1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹人物的概況。般包括姓名 、性別、年齡、職業(yè)、家庭背景等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)使用的語(yǔ)青必須符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣如姓名的書(shū)寫(xiě)、年齡的表達(dá)、人稱或稱呼的法取等。

2從多方面對(duì)人物進(jìn)行刻面。為了使人物的形象豐滿起來(lái)，給讀者留下深刻印象，我們可以對(duì)人物的外貌、神態(tài)、動(dòng)作等進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，并選取簡(jiǎn)短的事例來(lái)說(shuō)明其品質(zhì)和個(gè)性。在具體寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要正確把握現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)的用法。

3.對(duì)人物進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。在文章結(jié)尾處要介紹你對(duì)人物的評(píng)價(jià)或談?wù)撃愕膫€(gè)人感受，無(wú)論是喜歡還是討厭，是稱贊還是批評(píng)，都要明確地表達(dá)出來(lái)。

第二部分

寫(xiě)人記敘文萬(wàn)能模板

①Do you know (引出人物)?She/He ls (人物身份)

②She/He is tall and (身材)Her/His hair is

(頭友)She/He always wears (表情)and gives us the impression that

(每人的印象)

is always willing to (性格)She/He is good at (特長(zhǎng))

She/He always helps me out whenever I.Once (引出事列)To my surprise,

(她/他的做法)

③She/He is and I hope (表達(dá)愿望).

模板內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

①引出人物

②詳細(xì)介紹人物

③做出評(píng)價(jià)，表達(dá)感想

第三部分

必備詞匯與套用句型

必備亮點(diǎn)詞匯

beautiful漂亮的

pretty漂亮的

handsome帥氣的

strong強(qiáng)壯的

round face圓臉

broad face寬臉

straight hair直發(fā)

curly hair卷發(fā)

short/long hair短/長(zhǎng)發(fā)

long nose高鼻梁

ordinary-looking長(zhǎng)相普通的

wear glasses戴眼鏡

graduate from..畢業(yè)于....

get a... degree得到...學(xué)位

get further education深造

study abroad出國(guó)留學(xué)

humorous幽默的

clever/smart聰明的

patient耐心的

hard-working努力的

friendly友好的

warm-hearted熱心的

be fond of...喜.....

enjoy doing sth.喜歡做菜事

be crazy about.. .對(duì)....著謎

have a git for. ....天賦

be interested in... .對(duì)....感興趣

be in the lead處于領(lǐng)先地位

knowledgeable知識(shí)淵博的

famous著名的

well-known知名的

think highly o... .對(duì)....評(píng)價(jià)很高

be remembered as...被后人譽(yù).為....

be regarded as..被當(dāng)......

be respected by..受....尊微

devote one s lifetime to.傾注畢生精力

live in...居住在....

be born in..出生......

spent one s childhood in... ...過(guò)童年

live a happy busy life過(guò)著幸福/忙碌的生活

經(jīng)典套用句型

閃亮篇首句

(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is.. tall with the weight of..王楠，乒乓球世界冠軍，.高.... 體重....

(2) My mother is a rural woman, who..我的母親是一個(gè)農(nóng)村婦女，她...

(3) is young beautiful lady. ..是位年輕漂亮的女士。

(4) If you ask me who ....1 will tell you it is. ..at once.如果你問(wèn)誰(shuí)是.....我會(huì)馬上告訴......

(5) ...was from a worker / teacher s family ..生于一個(gè)工人/教師家庭。

(6) He/She was born on..(time) in ...(place) 他/地出生在......(時(shí)間)......(地點(diǎn))。

出彩篇中句

(1) Her eyes are very big/bright.她的眼睛很大/很明亮。

(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.他經(jīng)常穿著像牛仔和T恤之類(lèi)的便裝。

( 3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...他沒(méi)怎么上過(guò)學(xué)，但是他知道

( 4) His/Her family was so poor/ rich that..他/她的家庭是如此的貧窮/富裕以至于....

(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.

他每天都努力工作賺錢(qián)來(lái)供養(yǎng)我們的家庭。

(6) When at... he..當(dāng)..... ....

(7) I was about to...when...我正要....突然......

(8)He/She worked hard so as to improve.... 他/她為了提高.... 工作1學(xué)習(xí)很努力。

(9) His/Her father was so strict with him/her that..

他/她的父親對(duì)他/她是如此的嚴(yán)厲以至.....

精彩篇尾句

( 1 ) He deserves/is worthy of our respect.他值得我們尊重。

(2 ) Without her help, I will never... 如果沒(méi)有她的幫助，我永遠(yuǎn)都無(wú)法.....

(3) I will respect and love.... forever. 我將會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)尊敬和愛(ài)戴.....

( 4 ) She is honest and always ready to help others.她為人誠(chéng)實(shí)，并且樂(lè)于助人。

(5) She has set an example for...她給....樹(shù)立了榜樣。

( 6 ) Now I understand my father s love for me. I will never forget my father.現(xiàn)在我明白了父親對(duì)我的愛(ài)。我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記我的父親。

第四部分

模板范文演練

(河南)你身邊的每個(gè)人對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)都具有特殊的意義。請(qǐng)以“My special”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你家庭的某個(gè)成員或你的朋友、老師、同學(xué)等。

要求：1.在題目空格處填入你要描述的對(duì)象，如 grandma,teacher或 friend等;

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

3.80詞左右。

萬(wàn)能模板套用分析

首先，點(diǎn)明要敘述的人物

其次，對(duì)要敘述的人物進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的介紹。

最后，發(fā)表感受

滿分范文

My special friend

Do you know Mr.Smith? He is my English teacher.

He is special to me because he treats me as a good friend.①He always wears a smile and gives me the impression that he can help me out whenever I am in difficulty.

He has a good sense of humor and likes making friends.②His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps me with my English. He never smokes.He likes playing football.He likes China so much that he is planning to live in China in the future.(長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合原則，前面是簡(jiǎn)單句，此句是so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。)③

He is my special friend who l like very much,and I hope I can keep in touch with him.(句式多變?cè)瓌t，此句為復(fù)合句，who又引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句。)

你也可以這樣表達(dá)

① Treating me as a good friend,he is special to me.

②He is humorous and likes making friends.

③He has so much deep love for China that he is planning to live in China in the future

范文譯文

我的特殊朋友

你知道史密斯先生嗎?他是我的英語(yǔ)老師。

他對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很特殊，因?yàn)樗盐耶?dāng)成好朋友。他總是面帶微笑，給我留下一種無(wú)論我何

時(shí)遇到困難，他總會(huì)幫助我的印象。

他很幽默，喜歡交朋友。他的課非常有趣。下課后，他經(jīng)常幫我學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。他從不抽煙。

他喜歡踢足球。他如此喜歡中國(guó)，以至于計(jì)劃將來(lái)在中國(guó)定居。

他是我特殊的朋友，我非常喜歡他，我希望我們以后能保持聯(lián)系。

第五部分

熱點(diǎn)話題滿分寫(xiě)人記敘文必背

01

鄧亞萍是世界上最出色的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員之一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于她的作文。

1)1973年出生于鄭州。

2)5歲的時(shí)候開(kāi)始打乒乓球，她努力訓(xùn)練，所以她后來(lái)成為一名偉大的運(yùn)動(dòng)員。

3)她贏得了很多世界比賽，包括在奧運(yùn)會(huì)中的四枚金牌。我們?yōu)樗湴痢?/p>

4)鄧亞萍二十四歲時(shí)停止打乒乓球。在那之后她開(kāi)始在北京的清華大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，并且出國(guó)深造。

5)七年之后，她在劍橋大學(xué)完成了她的博士學(xué)位。無(wú)論她做什么，她從不放棄。

注意：

1)詞數(shù)：不少于80;

2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

提示詞：in the Olympics在奧運(yùn)會(huì)中Tsinghua University清華大學(xué)Cambridge University劍橋大學(xué)

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優(yōu)秀滿分范文

One possible version:

My hero is Deng Yaping. She is one of the best table tennis players in the world. Let me tell you something about her.

Deng Yaping was born in Zhengzhou in 1973. She started playing table tennis when she was five years old. She trained hard,so she became a great player later. She’s won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. We are all proud of her. Deng Yaping stopped playing table tennis when she was twenty-four. After that, she began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and attended university abroad. Seven years later,she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best. She is a true hero.

In short, she is so great that we will learn from her. As long as we study hard, our dream will come true one day.

詳解

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹世界上最出色的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員之一——鄧亞萍的相關(guān)情況。

2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱采用第三人稱。分為三段式：第一段引出主題;第二段介紹她的個(gè)人信息以及她在乒乓球上取得的成就;第三段表達(dá)自己對(duì)她的欽佩之情。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

02

本屆東京奧運(yùn)會(huì)上跳水小將全紅嬋一戰(zhàn)成名，給全世界留下了深刻印象。假設(shè)你是Mary，你的筆友John想多了解一些全紅嬋的相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給John寫(xiě)一封信，介紹一下這位奧運(yùn)小明星并表達(dá)你對(duì)她的祝愿。要點(diǎn)如下：

注意事項(xiàng)：

1.信件必須包括以上要點(diǎn)信息，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫;

2.詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右，信件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已在答題卷上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

3.信件必須寫(xiě)在答題卷的指定位置上。

Dear John,

I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan.

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All the best, Mary

優(yōu)秀滿分范文

One possible version:

Dear John,

I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan. She’s 14. She comes from Guangdong. She’s in Chinese diving team. Quan’s parents are farmers. She’s the second child in her family. She’s short and thin. She looks cute. She loves diving and practises it every day. In her free time, she likes playing computer games. Her dream is to get more champions for China. I hope her dream comes true.

All the best,

Mary

詳解

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書(shū)信作文。題目要求是請(qǐng)你以Mary的身份，根據(jù)提示背景，給你的筆友John寫(xiě)一封60詞左右的信，向他介紹一下奧運(yùn)小明星全紅嬋，并表達(dá)你對(duì)她的祝愿。

2.寫(xiě)法指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要是第三人稱;寫(xiě)作中，要根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)介紹全紅嬋的個(gè)人信息、家庭信息，最后表達(dá)你對(duì)全紅嬋的祝愿。文章要緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，千萬(wàn)不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適發(fā)揮，但要保證語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

03

請(qǐng)以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”為題，從外貌、性格、愛(ài)好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個(gè)人在這幾年的變化。

要求：1. 至少寫(xiě)出三個(gè)變化，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2. 80詞左右。

He/She Has Changed a Lot

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優(yōu)秀滿分范文

He Has Changed a Lot

My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.

Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.

Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.

Jimmy used to be shy. His face would turn red when he talked to people. Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public. That makes him more popular.

People sure change! I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.

詳解

題干解讀：該題目是話題作文，從外貌、性格、愛(ài)好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個(gè)人在這幾年的變化。

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：人稱用第三人稱;時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí);寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可采用“總分總”的思路來(lái)寫(xiě)，先說(shuō)這個(gè)人在過(guò)去幾年發(fā)生了很大的變化，然后具體闡述變化體現(xiàn)的方面，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意保證內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。

04

根據(jù)要求完成小作文。談一談自己的一個(gè)愛(ài)好。

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優(yōu)秀滿分范文

Everyone has hobbies. Hobbies give us a lot of happiness. Then what’s my hobby? My hobby is listening to music.

When I was a child, I enjoy listening to music, especially the cartoon music. As I grow up, I like all kinds of music. Though I’m not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.

Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try. You’ll find it so good.

詳解

1.題干解讀：題干要求談?wù)撟约旱膼?ài)好。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)圍繞自己的一個(gè)愛(ài)好進(jìn)行介紹，并適當(dāng)添加具體內(nèi)容，比如，有這一愛(ài)好的原因或這一愛(ài)好的好處是什么。

2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱主要使用第一人稱。可分為三段：第一段點(diǎn)明自己的愛(ài)好是什么;第二段陳述這一愛(ài)好的好處;第三段對(duì)自己的愛(ài)好進(jìn)行推薦并收尾。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意主謂一致，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

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